Picking Our Way

First Honorable Mention, 2004 HSA Renku Awards
Kasen written at Onawa, Maine

John Stevenson
Yu Chang
Hilary Tann
Paul W. MacNeil

Judges: Raffael de Gruttola and Judson Evans

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Picking Our Way

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picking our way
with a flashlight
mushrooms here and there

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twice around the pond
under a crescent moon

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old-time tunes
fill an auditorium
at the State Fair

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another neatly printed
job application

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Santas
at each entrance
to the mall

js

more praise
for her handknit mittens

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a Navajo
wins the chess tournament
in Kobe

yc

he gets a date
despite the elder aunt

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the tree huggers’
wedding ceremony
30 feet above ground

yc

slip knots
on both bathrobes

js

placing
a photograph
at the cloverleaf junction

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Picasso’s bicycle
becomes a bull

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hide and seek
with the moon
in the ruins

yc

“I’ll drink to that”
(exeunt)

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early editions
pan actors
and author

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the windows
need cleaning

js

at last
forsythia relieves
this brown expanse

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bits of feather
cling to the nest

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Pope John Paul
whispers
Easter Mass

js

are you my
anesthesiologist?

yc

moving the nightstand
to align
their beds

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happy to have her
finish his sentence

js

remembrance
of a touch given
without strings

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free passes
at theice rink

yc

it takes diamonds
to polish
the facets of diamonds

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she emulates
her best friend’s accent

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tourists
order fortune cookies
after dim sum

yc

little pills
for my heart

js

a cluster
of birch seeds
this moonlilght evening

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mountain leaves
start to turn

js

kyu

how cool the mug
before the coffee
is poured

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neighborly conversation
across the fence

yc

a stack of DVDs
to be viewed
at leisure

js

costumed dancers
for the Lunar New Year

yc

children carry
blossoming branches
to class

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butterfly antennae
dip then straighten

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